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excellent style...but this is just a mixture of ideas as far as I can see...it doesn't feel like it was clearly worked out. nonetheless, I love the cartoony style. I just wouldn't wear this.
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I like the idea of changing the old design so that the ostrich head is poking through something, but I am not sure what you picked was the right something
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i would change the style and expression of the ostrich to give the whole design a less funny, more whimsical feel.
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