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pgy149
pgy149 on Dec 15 '09
i try to put on other color tee..
comment?

also stop by @
http://www.threadless.com/critique/58224/M_onkey_I_n_B_lack
http://www.threadless.com/critique/57311/A_Dream_of_Christmas#v2
YaaH
YaaH on Dec 15 '09
I will give you 5 D
JCMaziu
JCMaziu on Dec 15 '09
Hahahaha.....funny.
In the back you could cast a shadow against the tee to give volume to the giraffe.

If you have time, maybe wants to score and comment here. Thanks.
pgy149
pgy149 on Dec 15 '09
thanks yaah;
thanks for the suggestion JCMaziu :)
scmonteagudo
scmonteagudo on Dec 15 '09
nice idea and i like the expression of the giraffe. I agree that shadow might make the t-shirt better

please critique mine also

Heart of Gold
bornd
bornd on Dec 16 '09
i'd change the colour around the head...
instead of white you could putin some clouds on the sky
to make it look more "transparent"...
totally like the idea&design!
timmartin15
timmartin15 on Dec 16 '09
I agree with bornd, the white of the background and the white of the eyes make it look a bit weird. Otherwise I love it!

Check mine out please
thelastmagician
thelastmagician on Dec 16 '09
i suggest maybe putting a black background in there instead of a white, it would make it look a little less weird.

but great start though! good idea!

Could you look at mine?
I Stared Too Long
pgy149
pgy149 on Dec 17 '09
thanks for allyour comment & suggestions :)
kibbit
kibbit on Dec 17 '09
hahaha...funny giraffe!
I agree with bornd...the clouds would be a nice touch!
I like the tee color, it looks like the giraffe is eating through a tree

would love to have your oppinion
http://www.threadless.com/critique/58356/fly_butter_fly
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